Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. Others believe that a woman’s role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. Which opinion do you agree?
There is no doubt that, employers are grappling to break gender stereotypes. While many people believe that women should limit their role to household chores and children, in my opinion they should be given same chances as men at workplace. In this essay I will explain my view with examples.
To begin with, it is widely accepted that feminine can contribute to society in a positive way. The reason for this is that, children of working mothers try to imbibe positivity and values that their mother's personality exudes and many time wish to follow their footsteps. To illustrate, a mother who is CEO in well-reputed company always inspire her adolescent to do well in every aspect of life whether it is personal or professional matters. Additionally, they can be aware of many issues such as diseases, fashion, trends and technology while working. Thereby they can inculcate knowledge into their teenagers. According to one survey by WHO, if mother is working and educated, she can help community by reducing mortality rate. Hence, they should be considered equally.
Furthermore, women are good decision makers as they have a lot of patience. In other words, any kind of emergency situation can be tackled by them wisely which can make them prominent in workplace. In contrast, there are certain situation at workplace when male employees can become impatient whereby such act can harm any organization's reputation in many serious cases. Moreover, female employees are more productive, organized and punctual than male. As a result, companies can grow financially. As per recent study, even though women are assigned a more tasks than their male counterparts, they can finish it in same time.
In conclusion, though it is commonly believed that female should be restricted to nurturing offsprings and taking care of home, in my notion for the development of well-being society and financial growth of companies, they should be allowed to match shoulder with men.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, no doubt, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in my view, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.171875 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81914319597 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6195286142 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3529411765 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6470588235 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235169580048 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661778486969 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998652520063 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164012890913 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856585273471 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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