A growing number of people rely on restaurants and convenience food rather than home-cooked food to supply most of their meals. What are the advantages and disadvantages of eating this way?
There is no doubt that, more and more people are depending on packed food and eatery rather that home made food to supply major of their meals. In this essay I will discuss the merits and demerits of this.
First of all, instead of home-cooked food, convenience food and restaurant food is more convenient option as it gives freedom to choose menu and time to eat. So that, people can order their meal whenever they feel hungry and whatever they want. For example, if some want to eat Italian food in night, he can easily get it in a restaurant whereas, cook it at home need many ingredients which might not available at home. Secondly, hotels and fast-food shops are viable for many people. In other words, this is a blissful option for person who do not have culinary skill. For instance, sometime when pupils need to stay in other country or city for further study and do not know how to cook, they prefer this option.
In contrast, most of the packed food are unhealthy as they have more number of preservative in it. Sometime this preservatives are not digested by many people which causes allergy and sometime death in children. To illustrate, Maggi instant noodles have lead percentage above permitted level which is toxic for people. Additionally, sometime eatery food might be unhygeine which causes food poising, stomach irritation, inflammation, and bloating. To clarify, sometime restaurants reuse oils to fry foods and some research shows that if we reuse oil, its property change which is menace to health.
In conclusion, while many people rely on outside food for its advantages such as conveniency and viability, there are also number of disadvantages as this is sometime unhealthy and unhygienic option.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, such as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95532646048 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60220290325 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587628865979 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9382814669 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2142857143 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366753702172 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119932336711 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956913347719 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233516759099 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543976521753 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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