Your colleague loaned you a book to use in a presentation at work. Write to your friend to say
What the presentation was about
Why it was important
How the book helped you
Dear Mike,
I am writing to express my gratitude for the book “Remote sensing of the environment” that I borrowed from you last week. As you know, I was giving a presentation for one of the most revenue customers on Monday, who wants to make 200 grand’s deal. In fact, my manager told me “Don’t screw it up” and I did not, thanks to you.
Thus, the main objection of it was to demonstrate the most effective methods of damage assessment in case of oil splits and your book was significantly helpful. I have found a chapter fully dedicated to the issue of oil spills and their affection on marine life and how to prevent it. As well as this, there was a detailed description with practical guidance, which software can be used for processing satellite data in order to assess the actual damage.
One again I really appreciated your timely assistance with this great book.
Best regards,
Maria
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-12-20 | Mariamirabella | 56 | view |
| 2020-08-04 | Mariamirabella | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 456, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a in order to assess the actual damage. One again I really appreciated your time...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 5, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...r to assess the actual damage. One again I really appreciated your timely assistan...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, thus, well, as to, in fact, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78616352201 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74223933805 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.710691823899 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5053760333 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.125 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261437761784 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877243655482 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596492254684 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153035939776 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293184687249 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.