In some cities and towns all over the world the high volume of traffic is a problem What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem

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In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

In many urban areas throughout the world, horrendous traffic has become a serious issue. The main reason of the issue is an enormous number of vehicle on the roads, which is increasing day by day. One the ways to tackle the risen traffic is introduction higher vehicle taxes and impose restrictions for non-residential transport.

To begin with, the factors that significantly contribute into a considerable quantity of cars onto the roads is a greater affordability of private transport for the public as well as a concept of consumerism when almost every person wishes to possess a bunch of material things including its own vehicles. Thus, numerous number of people, nowadays, would prefer to drive a car rather than use the public transport. For instance, I used to get to my office by bus and found it rather convenient; However, I have changed my mind lately and start grabbing a taxi instead.

The key to solving of the issue of nasty traffic jams is ban of non-local transport, as well as dramatic shift in the work of the public transport. For example, implementation of a strict timetable for every vehicle on the route and increasing of a car fleet. In addition, authorities might increase taxes for usage of private cars and then allocate received funds for renovation of the transport infrastructure, such as construction of new multi-level conjunctions. These measures will encourage citizens to switch to the public transport, on condition it will be convenient and pursue the schedule. Consequently, the situation on the roads should be improved.

In conclusion, taking into account the amount of vehicle on the roads causes the traffic jams, the first measure for dealing with it is decreasing its number by implementing of different measures.

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Average: 1.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13148788927 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06447832531 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584775086505 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4119379606 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.583333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0470268151033 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0209437316249 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0231675185543 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.032708145227 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190554376569 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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