your friend is in another country, you would like to work in that country. Ask advice for job possibilities at that country.
In your letter :
- say why you are looking in his/her country
- what skills and work experience you have
- ask some questions about salary, culture and benefits
Dear Jignesh,
Hi! How are you? I hope this letter finds you in a pink of health. Although it’s such a short time since we last saw each other, it feels much longer. I’m writing this letter asking for your help regarding job possibilities in your region.
Firstly, I would like to tell you that I’m exploring my opportunities to work abroad. To be honest, I’m fed up with Indian work culture specially with pathetic appreciation method so I decided to move out of country and I came to know that Canada offers several employment opportunities to immigrants. So I’m really interested to work in Canada.
I’ve very pleasant resume, which should take my task easy to land a job. Although I’ve 4 year experience in business administration, which is mostly in retaining existing clients for the company. I possess excellent understanding of business, which gave me deep insight on client’s requirement.
Furthermore, can I bug you with few more questions? Can you please tell me how are the general working hours and leave policies? Is there any variance in pay scale of outsider and local?
I look forward to hearing you soon.
Best regards,
Milan.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to regard' or 'regard'.
Suggestion: to regard; regard
...riting this letter asking for your help regarding job possibilities in your region. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, look, really, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21428571429 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95282127426 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.714285714286 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1938790758 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.1333333333 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0666666667 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229128546994 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764566309718 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068463257553 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126100199817 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573761000065 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.05 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.