Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot join him/her. You’ve found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Explain why you cannot go anymore
Say who can go instead of you
Say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear Eva,
I hope you and your family is doing well. First of all, I would like to say thank you for making this incredible plan of watching movie together as I was eagerly waiting for the same. I have to say sorry this time because I cannot come along with you. Let me explain you the reason.
To begin with, I received a message from my esteemed organization that there will a sudden audit tomorrow to review my balance sheet. Moreover, I am into finance department so cannot abscond from the situation as it’s a mandatory. Also, I am the head of the team so has to handover indenture to compliance team.
As for the movie, I am not going to hamper your plan so I have a terrific idea that you can go with my friend Sheela, whom you met last weekend on coffee with me. She is fun loving and jovial in nature. Besides, she’d be the best partner to hang out with you. I am sure you will not get boredom in her company.
I am sorry again for not able to join you in this movie, but I will make sure that next month we will see amazing film together.
Best Regards,
Urvashi
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, as for, as to, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26442307692 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22570192871 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629807692308 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3922803673 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.2307692308 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 4.34317383033 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351045790063 0.216113520407 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112979586706 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994023060369 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196906705961 0.12726935374 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138474849792 0.0580467560999 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.