Your friend has written to you asking for your advice on his/her parents who will be visiting your area. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter, you should:
· suggest the places they can visit
· recommend a place where they can stay
· offer to do something with them.
Dear John,
I'm glad to hear from you and I'm writing in response to your letter to offer my guidance to your parents to explore the city and make their trip memorable.
You won't believe how rich my hometown is in terms of historical buildings and I remember that your parents love visiting the ancient monuments. Therefore, I'd like to suggest visiting the Rock Garden, which is well-known for its interior and exterior sculptured beauty. This old structure is a prominent place among the tourists and has hand-made carvings on the walls. Moreover, there is a Sukhna lake in the outskirts and the rooftop restaurant in the vicinity presents a panoramic view of the lake.
With regards to their accommodation, It'd be my pleasure to have them as my guests. But If you insist on staying at the hotels then I'd like to suggest the Grand Inn, which is quite economical and has a reputation for world-class services. Again, I'd be happy to make their stay comfortable at my place.
At last, I'd like to take them out for dinner and perhaps It'd be a good idea to go out shopping together in the local market.
I'm sure they will enjoy it.
I look forward to seeing your parents soon.
Warm wishes,
Ell
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You and your family are
You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
introduce yourself
explain what is wrong with the furniture
say what action you would like the landlord to take
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Smith,
The objective of this letter is to bring in to your kind attention that recently we rented your apartment no. 13 Tiger building. However, My name is John Moses. Recently, I moved into this apartment
accompanying my family. I work as a software engineer at Gaditek Associates. Besides, I would like to address concerns with the furniture condition.
Concerning damage furniture, the dining table is uneven and wobbly. Also, the chair is missing from the dining table. Furthermore, the cabinet in the kitchen has broken locks and cabinets remains open. Finally, rusty scratches found on the wooden floor inside the kitchen and visible to everyone.
Moreover, I would like to request your visit for inspection of damaged furniture and households. In addition to this, I want them to be repaired or replaced by the new sets.
I hope to hear from you soon regarding my concerns.
Yours Sincerely,
John Moses
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...hopping together in the local market. Im sure they will enjoy it. I look f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74647887324 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57901643949 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629107981221 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9939763871 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.25 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255267382429 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792218824257 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713804254377 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125808006711 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693972555727 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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