Your friend is looking for a new job. Write a letter to him referring a new job. Include the following:
1) Describe the details of the job?
2) Why is it suitable for him?
3) How to apply for the job?
Dear Joel
Yesterday I was surfing my Linkedin page and found out that one of my colleagues was recruiting for a job opportunity in the company he works for. He is looking for an experienced mining engineer. With at least 8 years working under a Lean methodology and proven knowledge on cost management.
While I was reading the offer I instantly thought about you. I mean you are perfect for this position. You've had extensive experience under a Lean methodology for almost fifteen years, also while you were in front of the production department you were responsible for the budget as I recall.
I did send you an email regarding the information on how to apply for the job. It is very simple First of all open the link, fill the form with your data, secondly create a user name and password, and finally upload your updated CV.
Good Luck My friend, I hope to hear from you soon.
Carlos
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...roven knowledge on cost management. While I was reading the offer I instantly tho...
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Line 4, column 104, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: You've
...mean you are perfect for this position. Youve had extensive experience under a Lean m...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, at least, i mean, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61936896027 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.70625 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0678569599 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6666666667 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 4.34317383033 261% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222578766634 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893223583413 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823041265248 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117835178556 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630571221069 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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