Your friend is moving to your neighborhood and asks for some information about the local schools. Write a letter to your friend about the following:
- Describe the neighborhood and local schools
- Talk about one school that you think would be good for his/her kids
Dear John,
I am writing in response to your queries of local schools of Dubai and residential experience of the city. First, please accept my heartiest congratulations on your new role, owing to which you are moving from the UK to UAE. As a resident of UAE, I can assure you that you will enjoy the adopted home which is a most advanced nation in the entire Middle East.
Let me explain to you that the densely diverse neighbourhood in the world with nationals from almost 196 countries are living together in various residential communities. So, you expect to experience the various culture, food and traditions. There are plenty of schooling options available as all the recognized educational chains have opened their branches in the UAE. As a result, you can let your children pursue their academic qualification in renowned institutions.
I would like to suggest you enrol your kids in the GEMS school because they are following the International Syllabus and most of their teachers are European. Furthermore, GEMS have multiple branches all over the UAE so you can choose the location of school as per the suitability of transportation. Consequently, your kids would not have an issue in shifting the school.
Please feel free to get in touch if you need any further information
Yours truly,
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04128440367 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93993756615 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623853211009 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6776115637 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9090909091 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204854891301 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832473282812 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528230444895 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111190888301 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517915475291 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.