Your friend is moving to your neighborhood and asks for some information about the local schools. Write a letter to your friend about the following:
- Describe the neighborhood and local schools
- Talk about one school that you think would be good for his/her kids
Hey Lacey,
It is so exciting to hear that your family and you are going to move into my neighborhood later this year, I have already started to imagine the things we could do together. I still remember the time you took Jason and Lisa to my apartment four years ago, they were so little that time. Cannot believe they are already 7 and 13 years old now. From your last letter, you asked me about the neighborhood, and wanted to hear my advice about the school.
Well, the sunrise district is a nice area for young couples with kids because of its velocity to the educational facilities, safe and friendly neighborhood atmosphere. It is closed to the sunrise park, Brooklyn Museum and other community facilities, you can take Jason and Lisa to those parks easily during the weekend or even after the dinner. Besides, there are many interesting and educational programs holding in the area, you can take them to participate in these programs and be blended into the community more. Last but not least, the neighbourhood is safe in the area, as you can see from Zenly, they have 5 scores in the app. In terms of the school, there are different schools meeting specific needs for various individuals, public school and private schools.
Personally, I really like sunrise school. For their school, not only because they have the best teacher among the Brooklyn area, but also they would provide kids with various kinds of classes after school.
Again, I am so happy you are going to move into this neighbourhood. If you need more information about the area, let me know, I will be happy to tell you.
Sincerely,
Mona
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hey Lacey, It is so exciting to hear that your fami...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ted to hear my advice about the school. Well, the sunrise district is a nice are...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l be happy to tell you. Sincerely, Mona
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, really, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 937.175257732 145% => OK
No of words: 283.0 206.0 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80918727915 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51172381212 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 127.690721649 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583038869258 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 290.88556701 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.9570966126 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.692307692 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262126659971 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083394495988 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928278691169 0.0603063233224 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144792344395 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357107632667 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.