Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.
write a letter to the local council. In your letter
give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre
explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community
describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing today to share my concerns regarding the Lex community centre, and the impact it would have on the neighbours. There is an urge to save this demolishment, for betterment.
Let me share my belief in brief. The community centre is situated near the lake, accessible from almost any part of the locality. It’s currently being used for various cultural and social activities, apart from the sports and games being played being followed here. The centre has given many athletes, sportsman, cyclist and swimmers a stage to practise and in favour, bring medals and honour for the nation.
As a remedy, and because I comprehend the necessity of this, for everyone in and around the society, I suggest that funding can partially be contributed by the members utilising the services. A permanent shut down might have an adverse effect in the mind of the natives living nearby.
Thank you for your kind consideration.
Yours truly,
Abhishek Berry
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, regarding, so, apart from, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20245398773 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68888083942 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.717791411043 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8594467109 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0916688905975 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412371877853 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053185472363 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0553985107135 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582457946188 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.