Your local council is considering closing sports and leisure center that it runs, In order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
give details of how you and your friends or family use the center
explain why the sports and leisure center is important for the local community
describe the possible effects on local people if the center closes
Dear Sir\Madam,
I am writing this letter in regards to the recent announcement about shutting down the sports and entertainment center in our community. My name is Harpreet, and i have been a resident of this society for the last 15 years. Since the day we heard this news, we could not give a rest to our minds, as this center has become an indispensable part of our lives.
Not only me and my friends go to this facility to play several sports such as basketball and cricket but also my parents as well as their friends regularly go there for the walk and do yoga in an open ground available in this center. Furthermore, there are numerous rides and leisure activities, which is a great place for children to have some fun time in this crowded city after a long day at school.
As you know, there is no other such facility available in this area except this center. If this establishment had closed, there would be no place for us to go for any physical ventures and entertainment activities. As a result, people may end up being lethargic, and this would lead to an unhealthy community.
I hope you would consider my request to cancel this plan to demolish this infrastructure, that would be really appreciable.
Yours faithfully
Harpreet
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
... Sir\Madam, I am writing this letter in regards to the recent announcement about shutting ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, really, so, well, such as, you know, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71945701357 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77917211217 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610859728507 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.0976458989 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.3 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 4.34317383033 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110742435579 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526767975317 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499841310222 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0591563454094 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289847039623 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.