Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbors . In your letter:•Explain the reasons for the noise.•Apologies.•Describe what action you will take.

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Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbors . In your letter:
• Explain the reasons for the noise.
• Apologies.
• Describe what action you will take.

Submitted by soniya0119 on Fri, 01/04/2019 - 06:36

Dear Vipul,

This is Soniya. Hope you are doing well. I am your upstairs neighbors. I am writing this letter to express my discontent, which we are facing due to your dog. The dog offend bark in the midnight without any apparent reason.

By now, we have noticed that your dog barked in midnight continuously, I supposed, dog kept in drawing-room balcony.
Whenever it bark, sound always very loud and clear. due to high volume of Eco in our society, its bark become a huge noise.
However, we are facing this problem since 3 to 4 days. In fact caused by this issue we are not able to sleep properly so that it is getting terrible impact on our regular activities. my 6-year-old son, he also become very cranky when we try to get wake-up in morning for school because of incomplete sleep. it’s very deadly situation for us. Hence you have to be kept your dog in beside to your master room balcony,because in that side of view there is more lighting instead of drawing-room balcony.

I expect you will understand our problem and address the problem immediately.

Yours Faithfully,
Soniya.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 13, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'barks'?
Suggestion: barks
...t in drawing-room balcony. Whenever it bark, sound always very loud and clear. due ...
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Line 6, column 19, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'sound'.
Suggestion: always sound
...rawing-room balcony. Whenever it bark, sound always very loud and clear. due to high volume...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 52, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Due
...bark, sound always very loud and clear. due to high volume of Eco in our society, i...
^^^
Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...rible impact on our regular activities. my 6-year-old son, he also become very cra...
^^
Line 7, column 307, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It&apos
...for school because of incomplete sleep. it's very deadly situation for us. Hence y...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 347, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...it's very deadly situation for us. Hence you have to be kept your dog in beside ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 419, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , because
...og in beside to your master room balcony,because in that side of view there is more ligh...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, so, well, i suppose, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78125 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6724993179 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651041666667 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.814485446 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.2 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211062059357 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717644677823 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730098775286 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100918252496 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606118711566 0.0580467560999 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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