Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat.Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letterExplain the reasons for the noise.ApologizeDescribe what action you will take.

Essay topics:

Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat.

Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter

Explain the reasons for the noise.

Apologize

Describe what action you will take.

Dear mr. Smith

I am writing this on behalf of my flat owner mr. brown, and I express my sincere apologies for the troubles you had to face because of the irritating noise coming out of my home.

At first, I too am not sure about the real reason of the noise. After some inspection, it seems that the ceiling fan inside a locked room has been left turned on and that the fan's coil needs some lubrication. To be honest, it is utterly disturbing for us as well, because, the tenant of the room is out of station for this week. As a result, it would not be possible to get it repaired or switch it off until he returns.

However, the quick solution at the moment is to completely cut out the power supply for that room. Although the tenant should have been careful, I will need to ask for permission from the landlord.

Once again, I am extremely sorry to have caused so much botheration from past few days, that you had to write about it. The issue should be addresses as soon as i get response from mr. brown.

Best Regards,

Dheeraj

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 45, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 17, column 162, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, so, well, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4387755102 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30320273 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627551020408 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9384074406 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0909090909 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119603618373 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038004882041 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399127904476 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728378009697 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168104725387 0.0580467560999 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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