Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog.
Include in your letter:
· Your reason for writing
· What you would like to happen
· A nice, respectful style
Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you in pink of your health. I’m writing this letter in regards to your pet, Sandy.
I would like to bring to your attention about the dog, sandy being a constant disturbance in the apartment and to me in specific. After a tiring day at work last week, while I lay down in my room for a relaxing night, it started barking continuously for 2 hours straight which caused to lose my sleep and also resulted in a bad performance the next day at the office.
Although, I find it very joyful and innocent most of the times, situations as these are increasing with each day and creating an issue to the entire floor. Therefore I suggest you to either please use an anti-bark collar on the dog at night and weekdays to ensure the barking is controlled and we can have a peaceful night at our home or can be kept in a kennel during weekdays so that our schedules don’t get effected.
I hope this is taken in a positive way and be resolved at the earliest. Look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Mihira M
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 78, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...of your health. I’m writing this letter in regards to your pet, Sandy. I would like to bring...
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Line 4, column 157, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... creating an issue to the entire floor. Therefore I suggest you to either please use an a...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...’t get effected. I hope this is taken in a positive way and be resolved at the earliest. Look f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40101522843 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47305560384 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664974619289 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.3569466813 44.8134815571 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3333333333 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288665156867 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12204298931 0.0766984524023 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894380270896 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150788057872 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0991474313596 0.0580467560999 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.