Your office building doesn t have parking available Write a letter to the manager In your letter Explain the problem Suggest a solution Say why parking will benefit all employees | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

Essay topics:

Your office building doesn't have parking available.
Write a letter to the manager.
In your letter:
Explain the problem
Suggest a solution
Say why parking will benefit all employees

Dear Mr. James,
I am writing this letter regarding the lack of parking space that we employees are suffering from. My name is John Smith, the head of sales department and I have been working in this position for over a year, and unfortunately, I have had problems in finding parking space near the office every morning ever since I got hired.

To begin with, you are aware of the fact that our building is located in a crowded area of the city, which makes it difficult for the employees to get to work on time. I, for one, leave home so early in the morning in order not to get stuck in traffic; however, the lack of parking lots in the neighborhood has caused a major problem for me and my coworkers in the past few months.

To resolve the matter, I have come up with some ideas and I would like to share them with you. Firstly, it would be an amazing idea if the staff work from home by the laptops based on a schedule. This could not only prevent them from commuting long distances every single day, but help the company as you need to provide breakfast and launch for all the workers. Secondly, providing car services for the staff would be another great solution.

The fact is had we had a parking lot, we would definitely be able to serve better with more energy and positivity, from the first hours of the work time until the afternoon. Besides, we would not have to walk a long distance to our cars, parked ten blocks from The Office.

Thank you for your consideration in advance can I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,
James Smith

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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training

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Essay evaluations by e-grader

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 26.3917525773 178% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 937.175257732 138% => OK
No of words: 290.0 206.0 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44827586207 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33319630423 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 127.690721649 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 290.88556701 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1887712366 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 4.34317383033 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157025446395 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588563430424 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486981995097 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815160193832 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058850468067 0.0580467560999 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Essay evaluations by e-grader

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments