Your recently bought a smartphone from a specailized store, but it is not working properly. you have called the shop several times but no action has been taken.
write an email to the shop manager, in your letter
• give details of the mobile phone you purchased and when you bought it.
• describe the problems you are having with the smartphone
• explain what happened when you called the shop
• tell the manager what you would like him to do
Dear sir or madam,
I am Harry Martin, I recently bought an IPhone-XR from your shop. But unfortunately, the phone is not working properly. I am writing this letter to complain about the same.
I bought this phone on 22nd June as a gift for my wife. It is a coral color 128 GB storage phone; I have enclosed the copy of invoice for further details. Let me elucidate the issues, when my wife opened the box, she found that the earplugs were missing. Also when we tried to start the phone it did not launch. I tried charging it for two hours but the problem remained same then I charged it using another charger. Moreover, I realized another bigger problem when I made a call to my friend, the phone got disconnected again and again and the voice quality was also very low.
I called to your shop multiple times and all time I have to explain my problems from scratch to a new representative. They promise me that a delivery boy will replace my old phone to a new phone soon but it did not happen and it’s been two-week for the same process.
To compensate for such mistake and inconvenience I want you to send me new working phone (same model and features) as soon as possible. If this time also my complaint is ignored, then I will write the complaint to consumer court. For any clarification or further details, you can contact me at 401-401-4011.
Hope to get a positive revert from you soon.
Yours Sincerely
Harry Martin
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 255, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...e found that the earplugs were missing. Also when we tried to start the phone it did...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 262.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50381679389 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58306443948 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587786259542 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8797439273 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.75 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0625 4.34317383033 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219743317535 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754321531412 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674110390641 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135247831927 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712860861564 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.