Modern technology is now very common in most work place.
How do you think this has changed the way we work?
Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Advent of technology in the working environment favored current generation people by reducing manual and physically demanding works. Although there are numerous benefits acquired by us from it, there are also minor drawbacks on depending too much on them. In this essay, I shall outline how our tasks are made so easy by this technology and also its negative influences.
Today, most of the production companies avail the sophisticated machines that could help their manufacturing. As a result, they produce relatively lager number of units with a fewer em...
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...nd also its negative influences. Today, most of the production companies ...
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...as been made lot easier and quicker. Nevertheless, it is not without its nega...
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... they do not get the chance to practice this skills and eventually losing their abil...
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...mental effect in the longer run. To reiterate, development in technology ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'as to', 'for instance', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.212698412698 0.247107548796 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.149206349206 0.15552993741 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0952380952381 0.0946569551029 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0793650793651 0.0437536398559 181% => Too many pronouns. Try not to use 'you, I, they...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.111111111111 0.122223957237 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0444444444444 0.0403219363162 110% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73546001973 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0190476190476 0.0326786765898 58% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0698412698413 0.0861751148067 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0190476190476 0.0214082191602 89% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0253968253968 0.0119246538136 213% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1815.0 1933.38276553 94% => OK
No of words: 284.0 316.052104208 90% => OK
Chars per words: 6.36842105263 6.10592293882 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20519365927 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.369718309859 0.37474360046 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.257042253521 0.284197041944 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.193661971831 0.203843217982 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.133802816901 0.137313986986 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73546001973 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661971830986 0.560935902166 118% => OK
Word variations: 80.145038766 60.7401812628 132% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0911823647 81% => OK
Sentence length: 21.8461538462 20.7725350517 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1251455429 49.5273876611 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4444444444 93.4120437189 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.430976431 15.2821509519 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.43771043771 0.594174754866 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.39078156313 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01102204409 100% => OK
Readability: 47.5503791983 49.1922392462 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.24731182796 1.69127372897 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.264808310306 0.332604825255 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0428250764042 0.102734651613 42% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.043751849015 0.0668474354756 65% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.496006141848 0.534917948617 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.193715301996 0.148666948902 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913723419096 0.13441755203 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489551439605 0.0742828286743 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.228441039015 0.324241079732 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0570421658376 0.0640056729886 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161303801209 0.22793763319 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347165789465 0.0582452615562 60% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41883767535 58% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.88977955912 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.60220440882 38% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.00200400802 100% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.493987976 95% => OK
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.5 Out of 9