2. People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due
to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do
the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
The world of today has evolved beyond what it was decades ago, and it now
provides opportunities far beyond what people imagined. The advancements
made in the fields of transport and communication technology has enabled
individuals to build their lives and careers in any part of the world; the benefits
of which most certainly outweigh the cons.
The first major advantage, that one may enjoy, is the improvement in the
quality of life that accompanies living and working internationally. People are
able to choose where they live out of their own volition and often move to
places that provide exceptional amenities for its residents, such as free
healthcare, reduced taxes, and well built infrastructure. The second most
important benefit is the availability of a wide variety of jobs from around the
globe. A person has more options to choose from and will not feel limited by
where they are located.
On the other hand, there are some downsides to individuals being free to
move and work in other areas of the world. As technology has made it simple
to find work across continents, many of the local job roles are not filled. This
leads to a lack in the workforce in certain countries, which reduces their gross
domestic product. Another con faced, due to the improvement and ease of
transportation, is the lack of adequate infrastructure and housing for those
who choose to immigrate. Many cities do not have sustainable plans in place
for new entries, leading to increased living expenses, difficulty in finding
accommodations and any others.
In conclusion, there are some disadvantages to people finding jobs and creating
lives for themselves in other parts of the world due to a lack of employees
locally and insufficient planning for infrastructure. But the upsides of this
outweigh them as individuals lead a life of higher quality and are faced with
more choices for a career.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ch most certainly outweigh the cons. The first major advantage, that one may enj...
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Line 29, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Locally
...the world due to a lack of employees locally and insufficient planning for infrastru...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, well, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18095238095 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98087631122 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565079365079 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4625595523 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.538461538 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 27.0 4.38176352705 616% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209076201487 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632776427933 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452691441156 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0466777772992 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049965375694 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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