Nowadays, the Internet is beginning to rival newspaper as the best place to find information about the recent events. I believe that this trend will continue, and the importance of the Internet will surpass newspaper in the far future.
To begin with, we are now in the 21st century, where the development of the Internet is widely spread. With countless technical gadgets in hand such as smartphones, digital tablets, and notebooks, people can easily connect online and read a vast amount of information and articles on the various websites wherever they are. Furthermore, the exploration of social media platforms like Twitter, Facebook, and Instagram allow people to share articles and their comments which also encourage the discussion among people around the world. Finally, due to the instant characteristics of the Internet, events happened on the other side of the world can be followed on time as well. These aforementioned traits have successfully beaten newspaper and become the leader in the media industry.
Admittedly, there are still a group of people, the elderly in particular, enjoy reading newspaper. In their opinion, the sources from newspapers are more reliable because some column writers are professional journalists who has been well-trained. Besides, those love reading newspaper are simply fond of the feeling of holding paper and turning a new leaf rather than staring at the screen which does harm to eyes. Nevertheless, due to the revolution of the Internet, plenty of newspaper offices have shrunk their scales. Take the situation in Taiwan as an example, less families now still subscribe morning and evening newspaper. In the past, newspaper can still be seen sold in almost every stores, whereas, this situation is nearly nowhere to be seen. In my opinion, newspaper would be replaced by the Internet in the following decades.
By way of conclusion, Internet is a strong opponent which has prevailed newspaper to be the top choice when finding information. Although some people still read newspaper today, this situation will be changed in the next decades.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 567, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun families is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... the situation in Taiwan as an example, less families now still subscribe morning an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, furthermore, nevertheless, so, still, well, whereas, in particular, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29640718563 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83549373848 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601796407186 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8318132496 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5625 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206485406606 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645384914133 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478711517101 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131453185617 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320427499823 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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