Some people make their career choices according to what they find enjoyable, while others place more value on the salaries paid. In my view, it is essential to choose to do what man loves, whereas the importance of the amount of salaries also can not be overlooked.
Working in a field man enjoys is the most desirable. Motivation and passion gained while working can help people to overcome difficulties. For instance, in the process of running a restaurant, owners must have to deal with the problems of no positive profits. Instead of giving up, those who love what they are doing intend to invest all of their time and relationships to address any difficulties they encountered. Adversely, others may choose to close down their restaurants. When working in a position one loves, he or she can easily live with any issues and overcome them through perseverance and love.
However, the salary paid must at least high enough to meet the basic requirement such as paying the rents and bills. Even if an artist who has a great deal of passion with arts, the income he or she received is hardly enough for them to support themselves, they should find another career path instead. Surrounded by loads of pressure and anxiety of making money might also end up erode their passion towards their interest.
By way of conclusion, although the integration of career and interest can be fascinating, I would argue that people must at least work without worrying about the next meal at the same time.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, so, whereas, while, at least, for instance, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8671875 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62127712194 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640625 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6550529865 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.833333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157003451165 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522117865359 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377143892464 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900703397369 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375019874632 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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