Nowadays, traditional way of supporting oneself or a family does not be limited to one solution anymore. An increasing number of people have a second job after getting off work in order to earn extra money. Moreover, a further education has also been considered as one of the options to pursue a more satisfying career in their later life. In the essay, I would explain my perspective in detail.
To begin with, it is becoming a trend that every employee owns an extra job or a lucrative interest in the off-work hours. For instance, people who equip with a second language might find a part-time job as translators or interpreters. Due to the advance of the technology and the widespread usage of the Internet, more jobs are allowed to be completed remotely. Besides, they also have the opportunity to attend commercial exhibitions which are usually held on weekends. Another example regarding to this would be selling products on the websites such as eBay and Amazon. An increasing number of people enjoy making handcrafts and selling what they have made on the Internet for earing spare money.
Furthermore, lifelong learning has become the norm today. In order to pursue greater sense of accomplishment and gain better salaries, people choose to keep learning to achieve their goals. Take online courses for example, for those who dream of working overseas and therefore are willing to improve their language skills may take good use of these sources in their free time. Besides, a various of online Master Programs are available for people who are eager to obtain a Master degree. With the feature of online courses provided, chances for employees to obtain a better quality of life is not an unreachable dream anymore.
By way of conclusion, a conventional way of careers has no doubt experienced an enormous change these days. Finding a second job to earn more income and keeping to improve oneself are becoming options for employees today.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 154, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'keeping improving'.
Suggestion: keeping improving
...ng a second job to earn more income and keeping to improve oneself are becoming options for employ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00920245399 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71703828422 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567484662577 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7178133354 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.0588235294 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1764705882 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186557829241 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562409458829 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477226157619 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125560250191 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705157093121 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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