Some hobbies are relatively easy, while others present of more challenge. In my view, I would contend that both types of hobbies can be enjoyable, whereas, a more challenging hobby sometimes indeed can gain more pleasure.
To begin with, how much enjoyment a hobby brings depends on every individual. Interest, talent and desire included are the reasons why a person's hobbies are cultivated. Take bungee-jumping for an example, to whom pursue speed and challenge, it would be their top choice when enjoying themselves. On the contrary, to whom are in the fear of height might never try to join this activity considering their situation. Furthermore, people who are introverted might find sketching indoors is much joyful rather than hanging out with a group of people.
On the other hand, it is true sometimes that a more difficult hobby can bring more excitement, which usually needs more time, skills and knowledge to be acquired. Although at first people might feel frustrated, after years of practicing, the sense of achievement would also be greater. For instance, when I first started learning to sketch, not only does the object need to be carefully observed, but also the light casting on the object and the shadow it caused. Now I finally am competent at this skill and when seeing my drawings, my friends are always in awe. To me, it is the hardworks paid back makes me feel such a strong accomplishment. And the effect caused is greater than any other hobby.
By way of conclusion, there is no need to join challenging activity to gain a sense of enjoyment. Simple activity can have the same effect as difficult one. Nevertheless, the achievement gained after practicing for a long time may be more appealing to people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, whereas, while, for instance, in my view, it is true, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96575342466 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8004570305 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609589041096 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6951005187 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.625 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197752080721 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560125040113 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453293066237 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117759629766 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033804531211 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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