Cities are often seen as places full of opportunity and hopes; however, urban life can sometimes be challenging. From my perspective, governments could do more to improve the life in metropolis.
To begin with, the main problem of holding decisions of moving to cities is the high living cost people have to afford. Residents there have to pay much higher on housing, transportation, and groceries. Another issue that the authority has to tackle with is the high crime rate. Robbery and theft happen more often in cities than in rural areas. Besides, cities are also the breeding ground for gangsters and drug dealers. For instance, according to the report of crime rate in 2018 in Taiwan, data have been shown that in comparison with countryside, the crime rate is much higher in Taipei, which is the capital city in Taiwan.
Nevertheless, confronted by these problems, there are various steps governments can do to address the them. Firstly, more social housing can be constructed for those economically marginalized groups such as young generation and the elderly in particular. Lower rents can reduce parts of the heavy burden laid on their shoulders. Secondly, travel tickets can be introduced to limit the transport costs. Take Taipei city for example, the introduction of this ticket help a vast number of commuters cut down their budget living in Taipei. Finally, governments and the police need to cooperate to crack down on crimes for protecting citizens.
To capitulate, although an increasing number of people long for moving to cities, there are various of drawbacks make people hesitated. The authority can take some steps to tackle these problems and bring people a better and safer life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'them'?
Suggestion: the; them
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, for instance, in particular, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14695340502 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74638054203 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602150537634 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6435806808 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.75 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347672776104 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096667579291 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688559583778 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206584046701 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680830667576 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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