It is said that the advantage in the 21st century is the overwhelming number of choices presented us. I completely agree with this statement and I believe the Internet and globalization should own the honor.
To begin with, the Internet makes us live in an information explosion era. There are countless websites offering entertainment, news, videos, and music streaming, many of which are free in order to rival in the competitive online world. Admittedly, with an abundance of media, we might be led to confusion. Take online streaming platforms for example, viewers have to make a decision between Netflix, Fox +, HBO, etc, which include various series and movies. It is common that people have no idea which platform they should subscribe. Furthermore, people nowadays do not need to subscribe the service of newspaper and still can catch up events throughout the world everyday. Nevertheless, with easy access to the Internet, there are hundreds of unapproved information online. People will easily be brainwashed or tricked without even notice it.
Alongside the influence of the Internet, globalisasion has made the world smaller. One element that influences us the most is international trade. In the past, people mainly consumed goods produced from their own land, only few people could enjoy the imported products. Whereas, the appearance of economic zones and the regulation about zero tariffs makes the circulation of goods without boundaries. Choices of products have therefore increased and caused people to be faced with dilemma. There is even a prevalent phrase in Taiwan called the obstacle of choosing, meaning the options left for people are far too much to bear.
By way of conclusion, with the advance of the Internet and globalisation, there are indeed too many options for people to decide.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, nevertheless, still, therefore, whereas, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28965517241 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86013066511 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637931034483 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7420341611 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2352941176 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0588235294 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228115019081 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620623595563 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582553719539 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137295541599 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216410502536 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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