In this day and age, it is believed that problems casued by accommodation and transport are rising rapidly in many big cities. Hence, many businesses are encouraged to move to the rural areas as a solution to solve these problems. While I accept that this solution may have some drawbacks, I strongly believe that its benefits are outweighed.
On one hand, this trend has some drawbacks. If businesses have to be moved into rural areas, its manager will face many huge problems. To take an example, some rural areas is not suitable to build harbors or roads and there must be some others costly means of freight forwarding, which considerably affects to the profit of a company. Furthermore, there are some certain businesses that can only stay in urban areas. To take an example, some luxuries brands such as Gucci, Channel, Dior can not open their stores in rural areas as people living their are not willing to pay money for their production.
On the flip of the coin, there are many reasons supporting the opinion to move businesses into rural areas. First, when there are more and more factories, companies built in the countryside, we will be able to make use of all area in our country for developing. To be more specific, workers will not have to move from their hometowns to urban areas to work, they can easily find works in their neighborhood. Hence, this will help governments in the campaign which prevent worldwide problems such as overpopulation, emission, greenhouse effect and so forth. Second, building businesses in rural areas is also means that these areas will have an opportunity to develop. If there are many companies in a rural area, that area's government will have responsible to build hospitals, schools and many others construction to bring out the best service. Hence, every single area of the country will be able to develop, not only a few center like in these days.
All in all, I would argue that the benefits of moving businesses to the rural areas outweight its drawbacks
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
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Line 3, column 719, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'areas'' or 'area's'?
Suggestion: areas'; area's
...re many companies in a rural area, that areas government will have responsible to bui...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...le to build hospitals, schools and many others construction to bring out the best serv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, so, while, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84593023256 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63963572956 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511627906977 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5785907247 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.1875 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248994093935 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965946434847 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08088711573 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171214730921 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447292066317 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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