Accommodation and transport problems are increasing in many large cities. Businesses are encouraged to move to rural areas. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages
It is true that many companies currently are encouraged to move to country side. While there are some negative impacts of this trend, I would argue that its benefits are more significant.
On the one hand, changing location of companies has some drawbacks. Firstly, delivering has become a noticeable problem for business moving. Companies tend to spend more money on distributing goods because of farther distances from rural areas to customers. Take a vegetable production company as an example, commodities need to be delivered and preserved more carefully which can increase the risk of quality deterioration of products. Secondly, moving business is not only moving manufacture, materials, but also workers and their families. A number of people migrating to rural regions are likely to rise the criminal rate in these areas which has detrimental impacts on local individuals ‘s life.
On the other hand, I believe that these potential problems are outweighed by the benefits. Firstly, moving organization to rural areas play an important role in solving traffic congestion and the shortage of accommodation in some wealthy cities. Many citizens migrating to country side result in the reduction of vehicles travelling on the streets. This is likely to decrease the levels of environmental problems such as air and noise pollution that impair public health. Secondly, in rural regions the labor wage and the cost of land rental for business or living are much cheaper than that in urban areas. As a result, the companies may save a great amount of money which can be used to invest in other fields or expand business scale productions.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the positive impacts of businesses moving to rural areas to tackle housing and transport problems are more significant than the drawbacks.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23208191126 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84989270535 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58361774744 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7720194026 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.2 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248622207878 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734975973543 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562215108826 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146128625175 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432472294119 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.