Advantages and disadvantages of being a leader.
Leadership is an important factor make for becoming successful in life. As being a leader, people have many opportunities to develop themselves. Besides, people also get some backsides as they play the leadership role.
When it comes to the benefits, as being a leader, people have number of chances to enrich social skills. The leaders usually engage their team and solve problems. As a positive result, they have excellent arrangement skill and solving problem skill. Besides, leaders can approach many new friends in order to expand relationship. The more relationship people have, the easier they become successful. Moreover, the leaders command great power and influence. Therefore, they entitled to manage and assign task for others instead of being passive in work.
In spite of many advantages, it is undeniable that playing leadership role has some disadvantages. First, leaders are under high pressure in term of responsibility. It requires they have to spend enormous effort and time for their work. Besides, it is very difficult to satisfy all followers because different people have different their own opinions. So, leaders must make a high effort to be fair and rational. If not, they are at the risk of losing many relationships.
In conclusion, being leaders is a necessary challenge that people should get. Although of some downsides, people can get many advantages of being a leader.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30357142857 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87072663773 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.2602294488 49.4020404114 33% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.0 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4444444444 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257864581485 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913836610783 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992727461156 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185078420218 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970876834469 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.57 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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