The advantages and disadvantages of being an only child?
Did you know to be an only child to be a beloved servant of God. Having an only child means more love than other child.
In the first place being an only child will be loving care and attention of these parents, because you have no other child. Secondly an only child will have all the opportunities. For example parents will only care about us. Furthermore all the property of your parents will remain with you in that state.
However, being an only child requires a great deal of responsibility, because an only child must support his or her parents in the future. Then loneliness leads to boredom in life, since, you will not have a brother or sister to accompany you. In addition you do all the work yourself.
All things considered I am against it because it is to too bad to be alone.
Thank you for paying attention to me.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 45, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...he first place being an only child will be loving care and attention of these parents, be...
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Line 2, column 226, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...xample parents will only care about us. Furthermore all the property of your parents will r...
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Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
... brother or sister to accompany you. In addition you do all the work yourself. All th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, then, for example, in addition, you know, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 685.0 1615.20841683 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 153.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47712418301 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42627197092 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 176.041082164 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581699346405 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 506.74238477 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5477398893 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.2727272727 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.9090909091 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396903546722 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174530231478 0.084324248473 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.169585724839 0.0667982634062 254% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223233839848 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170860244489 0.056905535591 300% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 13.0946893788 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 78.4519038076 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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