Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development.
In the modern life, commercial products are more and more needed extensive promotion to everyone. Therefore, advertising industry is becoming more necessary and swiftly developing. Many people think that development is very positive but others think that those positive aspects can not compare with negative aspects.
These days, we can easily accidently see any advertisement on television or internet. There are many common advertisement type rapidly developing. However, instead of letting customer know information of products, what are advertised, these advertising companies make it become sign of disorder, what called “spam”. A typical example is that the advertisements without content are used to catch customer attention and disregard any feeling of them.
However, we can completely ignore positive aspect of advertisement for economic development. Firstly, It help customers more easily approach product, what they want to buy and have objective perspective. Therefore, supply and demand can be rebalanced, bring benefit for both buyers and sellers. The advertisements with content can have quiet highly entertaining. They usually are based on a storyline and attract viewers like a short film. The great innovation of advertising industry in the current time is as the result of these above reasons.
Conclusion, I think that any development will have its reason. The negative aspects of it depend on target of companies, who are behind the advertisements that we watch.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...t for economic development. Firstly, It help customers more easily approach product,...
^^^^
Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are usually
...an have quiet highly entertaining. They usually are based on a storyline and attract viewer...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69642857143 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16101693466 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629464285714 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 4.0 0.384769539078 1040% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.429956001 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9333333333 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309341177947 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912521735666 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815557643857 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175074800412 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115149130766 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.