“Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?”
Advertising is gaining enormous popularity in recent years. This issue is fraught with controversy, while advertisements are considered to be beneficial, they have negative limitations.
It is important to recognize that one of the key functions of advertisements provides consumers with adequate and accurate information about their products. Because of the improvement of technology so many companies expand their adverts by every kind of mass media and nearly all hoardings. For instance, the advertising of the telephone which supplies information like how to use it, its battery and price. Another advantage is that advertising also plays a significant role in fostering a diversity of employment opportunities. In other words, it provides occupation for artists, painters or copywriters in designing such as logo, contents of ideas for ads. It also agreed that advertisement is one of the main sponsors of a large number of industries, for example the entertainment industry like sport, music, theatrical events.
Nevertheless, advertising could cause several disadvantages to human. First of all, advertising development is rapid so it also has negative effects that can manipulate people. Furthermore, the facts show that the advertising expense increase, so the products become more and more high price because nowadays many companies focus on selling a brand image. However, sometimes the quality of the product is considered (a) bad and it cannot truly like their advertisements. Moreover, advertising could cause extreme disadvantages to children who can easily be influenced by them because children are in the development phrase, they cannot understand the connotations hidden in advertising messages. Children affected by ads like junk food, violence cause obesity and violent actions.
To summarize, based on the above-mentioned explanations, individuals may gain both facilitating merit and downside through the growing prevalence of advertisements.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 725, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...tisement is one of the main sponsors of a large number of industries, for example the entertainme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, as for, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78620689655 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37335153735 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627586206897 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2235321434 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.866666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188384339959 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550775999923 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608178674004 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923430339486 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077744290299 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.