Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?
Along with the development of businesses, the number advertisements is growing gradually that can be seen anywhere from the street to stations or even on social media. from my perspective, this phenomenon has both positive and negative effect on businesses and customers.
on the one hand, advertisements are beneficial for both sellers and customers is an undeniable fact. thanks to the large-scale of advertisements, sellers are able to approach prospective customers by catching advertising media and information. therefore sellers gain more popularity, accompanying with the increase of sales. for instance, a well-known advertising video in Vietnam called "Dien May Xanh" has became iconic for the company and certainly boosted it sales considerably. on the other word, consumers are able to get more information about the products via advertisements and to make comparison between similar products. therefore they have a variety choices while purchasing needed stuffs and to choose the optimum goods.
on the other hand, the drawbacks of advertisements should not be overlooked. firstly, advertisements appearing pervasively on the television makes watchers feel annoyed because the telecasts were constantly interrupted by an irrelevant promotion. as a result, although the promoted productions might be needed for the watcher, they still feel irritated. secondly, the widespread advertisements also reach audiences that are not suitable to see it. for more details, children might see promotions that were created fot adults. for example, promotions about alcohol drinks are now can be seen on the television or on the street, where are obvious for children to see. this can lead to the misguided thinking of children on alcohol drinks and they will start being curious about the experience of how it is drunk. the proof is lots of people who are under the age of 18, have tried drinking alcohol.
in conclusion, i want to reaffirm that although the booming advertising phenomenon brings numerous benefits for humans, the negative impact should also be put into consideration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55451713396 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1741536823 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591900311526 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.063758042 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.882352941 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.29411764706 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158134667167 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494374369884 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407226042522 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945870923506 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287296349003 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.