Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone's life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is not hard to find advertisements and we can avoid it because it appears surround us every several days. Some people believe advertising plays as a positive part in our lives and I totally agree with this statement because advertising not only helps people know more about products, but also provides a number of job opportunities.
Advertising provides good information and helps us make decisions easily. There are a lot of products in the market and they are updated day by day. People suffer from confusion when they choose some items, so advertisements are considered as a presenter which provide and enhance customer’s knowledge about products. Customers can handle information about ingredients, functions and objects of products, so people can choose the suitable products which satisfy their demands. For instance, when I intend to buy new shampoo which helps my hair be more clear and cool. According to advertising on TV, I chose Clear shampoo instead of Sunsilk shampoo because Clear’s functions satisfy my requirements.
Giving more job chances is another advantage of advertising. A completed advertisement video requires a lot of people such as celebrities, cameremans. The more advertisements are made, the more people are employed. Furthermore, when advertisements are launched in the market, it can put the consume rate higher. So that, more products are sold, as a result, companies need to produce more products and more people are employed to serve cumstomer’s demands. According to the Vietnam milk union, from 2017 to 2019, the unskilled workers who are employed by Vinamilk companies has increased by 30%.
In conclusion, advertising appears surround us any time, anywhere and people can refuse it. There are a lot of advantages which advertisements bring to us such as providing informations about intended items which we will buy in the near future. Furthermore, more and more employees are hired thanks to advertising.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to clear'
Suggestion: To clear
...According to advertising on TV, I chose Clear shampoo instead of Sunsilk shampoo beca...
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Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...quirements. Giving more job chances is another advantage of advertising. A comp...
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Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... are launched in the market, it can put the consume rate higher. So that, more products are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32580645161 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541935483871 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6073992652 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1176470588 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201315168139 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683532910325 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723504017948 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14475805282 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817287977912 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.