Task 2: Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
It is thought that research which are related to science should be organised and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. This essay totally agrees with this statement because private companies always care about the profit than any aspects, and the governments can contribute to the success for the community.
The first reason why private companies should not be allowed to organise scientific research is that they can break ethical standards because of profit. The main purpose of any private companies is profit and sometimes they can do anything to achieve their profit goals. They do not care about social results, and bring the long- term consequences to peoples’ lives, making the big effects on the quality of life. For example, some companies plant trees changed in genetics to encourage their productivity. They even do not care if consumers suffer from organ or immune systems weakness when they consume their products.
Another main reason why the governments should be controlled scientific research is the governments make the research to seek solutions for social problems, especially in the medical field, contribute to improve the quality of life. There are a lot of issues that appear everyday and sometimes they have a change in peoples’ lives, so that the governments need to seek solutions to tackle these problems and enhance residents’ lives. For instance, Corora virus is the pandemic which occur not only in a nation but also in over the world, the governments need to make research to find out the vaccine for this pandemic to save peoples’ lives.
The governments should be carried out and controlled research which are related to science because this helps to avoid breaking the ethical standards made by private companies and the governments contribution can help to develop the life of residents.
It is thought that research which are related to science should be organised and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. This essay totally agrees with this statement because private companies always care about the profit than any aspects, and the governments can contribute to the success for the community.
The first reason why private companies should not be allowed to organise scientific research is that they can break ethical standards because of profit. The main purpose of any private companies is profit and sometimes they can do anything to achieve their profit goals. They do not care about social results, and bring the long- term consequences to peoples’ lives, making the big effects on the quality of life. For example, some companies plant trees changed in genetics to encourage their productivity. They even do not care if consumers suffer from organ or immune systems weakness when they consume their products.
Another main reason why the governments should be controlled scientific research is the governments make the research to seek solutions for social problems, especially in the medical field, contribute to improve the quality of life. There are a lot of issues that appear everyday and sometimes they have a change in peoples’ lives, so that the governments need to seek solutions to tackle these problems and enhance residents’ lives. For instance, Corora virus is the pandemic which occur not only in a nation but also in over the world, the governments need to make research to find out the vaccine for this pandemic to save peoples’ lives.
The governments should be carried out and controlled research which are related to science because this helps to avoid breaking the ethical standards made by private companies and the governments contribution can help to develop the life of residents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 570, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'systems'' or 'system's'?
Suggestion: systems'; system's
...f consumers suffer from organ or immune systems weakness when they consume their produc...
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Line 4, column 271, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
.... There are a lot of issues that appear everyday and sometimes they have a change in peo...
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Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...dards made by private companies and the governments contribution can help to develop the li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25167785235 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70645645369 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496644295302 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.8020876458 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.272727273 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0909090909 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424442902919 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179640869562 0.084324248473 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.202931107228 0.0667982634062 304% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297250201345 0.151304729494 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126321505427 0.056905535591 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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