International travel is becoming cheaper and cheaper, and more countries are now opening their doors to foreign visitors. Do you think that the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
Taking trip in other countries is more popular because of low expenses and more countries are now welcoming visitors. This essay will argue that despite travelling oversea lead to environmental problems, the benefit of opening countries’s door can improve local people’s lives and the advantage outweighs any drawback.
The actual result of traveling more and more is environmental issues. Because the cost to take a trip is cheaper so more people can afford for their trips. As a result, more flights take off an annual year, which releases the huge amount of cacbondiodixe. More cacbondiodixe emmit into the air, more air pollution people gets and global warming is the inevitable result. According to the research of UNEP, the average world’s degree in this year increased 3 degrees Celsius compared with 10 years ago. However, we can solve this issue by charging the higher tax for both domestic and international flights.
The primary advantage of welcoming travelers is the improvement in people’s lives. Developing tourism means developing the area to welcome visitors. More accommodation, restaurant and entertainment places are built to serve the tourist’s demand. This tendency requires a big number of employees, so it provides a lot of job opportunities. For instance, Danang, which city has beautiful beaches and landscapes, has dropped 58% the rate of unemployed thank to tourism. Tourism is an essential field which contributes in enhancing local people’s lives.
In conclusion, the improvement citizen’s lives far outweigh the supposed disadvantage of cheaper trip.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5243902439 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07187190259 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646341463415 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5278683935 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240208076967 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712974590525 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602813024846 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147452993508 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658749373502 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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