Some people believe that the only purpose of films is to entertain. But others say films should have educational value. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people argue that films are made just to entertain, while others would believe films need to have values which to educate viewers. While the main purpose of films is to entertain because it easy to release stress, films should combine with values to educate people because films’ content can affect on people’s behavior.
On the one hand, people consider films as a method to get rid of their pressure. When people get stressed out, they tend to find some kinds of entertaining to relax their mind and films are the best choice. There are a lot of kinds of films so they can easy to choose one which suitable with their emotion. According to BBC news research, nearly 80% people living in Washington DC said that they often watch films instead of doing something else to release their stress. In my opinion, some of films are following the trend now and they do not have any values, they just waste our time and we can learn nothing from them.
On the other hand, films not only to entertain but also to educate. Film’s content can affect on human behavior because people tend to learn and follow what happened in the films. The values contribute film by film and they become one of our characters gradually. For instance, Le Van Luyen who was a young murder in Vietnam, he killed five people in a family and he said that he was affected by violence films he always watched. In my perspective, if films just have educational values, they will be boring because the main purpose of films is to entertain, so mix well between entertain and educate is the best way to make films more benefits.
In conclusion, although entertaining is the main film’s mission because they help people immerse ourselves on films and forget the fact in some minutes, films should have educational values because film’s contents have a big effect on people’s attitude.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 298, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ucate people because films’ content can affect on people’s behavior. On the one hand, p...
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Line 2, column 487, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the films') or simply say ''some films''.
Suggestion: some of the films; some films
...to release their stress. In my opinion, some of films are following the trend now and they do...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...but also to educate. Film’s content can affect on human behavior because people tend to l...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39041478414 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513846153846 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.5124707517 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435380772493 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191063159372 0.084324248473 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115645442579 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329368112729 0.151304729494 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974419687056 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 298, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ucate people because films’ content can affect on people’s behavior. On the one hand, p...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 487, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the films') or simply say ''some films''.
Suggestion: some of the films; some films
...to release their stress. In my opinion, some of films are following the trend now and they do...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...but also to educate. Film’s content can affect on human behavior because people tend to l...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39041478414 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513846153846 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.5124707517 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435380772493 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191063159372 0.084324248473 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115645442579 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329368112729 0.151304729494 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974419687056 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.