Nowadays, many animal species are becoming extinct. Some people believe that countries and individuals must solve this problem, others believe human beings are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A lot of animal species around the world are becoming disappear. While some people argue that both nations and citizens have to solve this issue to balance the ecosystem, I believe humans can create everything without animals and people should be put priority on animal.
On the one hand, people have to solve animal extinction issues to balance ecosystem. The survival of this species is the food chain of others. If one species disappears, other species are not controlled anymore and this leads to serious environmental problems. For example, if people punch too many sharks, this leads to sharks’ extinction. The small fishes which are sharks’ food will generate quickly and destroy the ocean environment. However, I believe that it is more necessary to develop ourselves than resolve the extinction problem because people are the backgrounds of human civilization.
On the other hand, it is thought that human beings are more essential because people built up human civilization. People are outstanding to other species because people have thinking, awareness and creativity. We can create food, accommodations, cities, countries, people can live and depend on each other without animals. For instance, scientists in America are developing energy packages which contain a number of nutritions and vitamins. These packages can recharge people’s energy immediately without eating food. I believe improving human ability is more preferable because it makes people more independent.
In conclusion, although solving animal disappearance helps balance ecosystem, human beings are more essential because people have enough ability to build human civilization without animals.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 965.302439024 149% => OK
No of words: 254.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64566929134 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83859086788 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547244094488 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 283.868780488 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5192592527 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337222869707 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116334270828 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719985997883 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219859972115 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490376239846 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 40.7170731707 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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