Advertising is all around us, it is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is negative.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Advertisement is a part and parcel of our daily life.We are exposed to them through almost all medium of information exchange. Television, billboards, newspapers, social media are just a few of them. The influence of advertisement has increased to such an extent that it becomes a part of our life. Thus the good and the bad of the advertisement world has to be discussed.
Advertisement has created a network between a product and its customer.Almost all of the information about a product or the possibilities of a products existence is conveyed through the medium of advertisement. Global advertisement has revolutionized the world economy. Due the accessibility of different products or same products with different brands customers now can compare and evaluate products quality and pricing. which resulted in a competitive market where product quality has increased manifold compared to its pricing. This was made possible because of the availability of global advertisement. Even political advertisement has influenced people to choose their nation leaders based on similarities of ideas and plans between the general people and the political parties. which eventually seals the fate of a country.
False advertisement is like an epidemic which not only fools a customer but also can create a chain reaction of misconceptions about a person,product or idea in the society. They can emotionally make people to buy their products though providing lucrative promotions and offers at the cost of reduced product quality. Now a days the facts has become fictions. advertisement has become a medium through which a company forced its ideas about its product to the people rather than providing the facts about it.
Political parties are throwing dirt at each other.They are creating scandals to win the election.It has become a nasty business now a day due to the availability of social media advertisement. People are really confused about what to believe and what not to.
Although, due to the fact that false advertisement can destroy the moral of the society, it is clear that what free flow of authentic information can bring in the world. Thus, Advertisement need not to be abolished but to regulated by the law so that it can used for the common good of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, then, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1929.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24184782609 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20222169302 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497282608696 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2068749713 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.526315789 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3684210526 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.31578947368 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143942549147 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517297362957 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062946051627 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896948060578 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726204856421 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.