Air pollution has made cities become less pleasant places to live in recent years.
What do you think are the causes of this problem and what solutions can you suggest?
It is true that air contamination in many cities around the world is a major reason for locals' resentment. This issue can be attributed to several reasons, and some strategies can be implemented to alleviate it.
Two primary factors are responsible for air pollution in cities. The first of these is the overspreading of vehicles in major cities. Owning a car is no longer a challenge as the majority of dwellers of any cosmopolitan city can now obtain one with ease. This is mainly due to the unprecedented competition between auto manufacturers that provide people nearly everywhere with practical, powerful and reasonably priced cars. With these vast numbers of cars come more and more air pollution. Needless to say that cars' emissions of tremendous quantities of carbon dioxide and other gases are seriously detrimental to the quality of the atmosphere of cities, which exacerbate the issue of air pollution. Another worth mentioning factor in this regard is the existence of a growing number of factories in cities. A lot of combustion processes take place in these manufactories, which means more and more gases being emitted into the air.
However, a number of methods can help improve air quality in cities and cease the undergoing worsening of air pollution. Encouraging people to abandon their traditional cars that run on fossil fuels and replace them with more eco-friendly ones is one of the strategies. 'Hybrid cars' can make a difference, according to some studies, as they tend to release less CO2 and other harmful gases because they run on electricity rather than fossil fuels. If intensive awareness campaigns for this alternative are launched through mass media, coupled with the availability of more powerful, functional and cheaper electric cars, drivers will begin to participate. As for factories, governmental intervention should be made to move these into the countryside that is unpopulated. If this happens, cities' dwellers will most likely enjoy a better air quality.
In conclusion, air pollution is one issue that steals happiness from the inhabitants of cities. The massive number of cars and factories in cities seem to be responsible for a large part of this problem. To mitigate this, hybrid vehicles that are more environmentally-friendly should be encouraged, and factories need to be shifted to uninhabited lands.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, well, as for, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1985.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26525198939 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13463663781 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546419098143 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7394995285 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.473684211 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8421052632 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57894736842 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137523835304 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468886265938 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310547710862 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933706982218 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00801040045936 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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