Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinions.
Opinions are varied on whether building numerous sports centres is the most effective way to improve people's health or if there are other strategies that serve best in this regard. As far as I am concerned, providing more sports facilities can, undoubtedly, help enhance public health but other measures are also required to be coupled with this strategy to achieve better results.
On the one hand, constructing a larger number of sports facilities has positive impacts on public health. Many people who live in the countryside, for instance, lack access to gym centres and therefore the chance of them working out is limited to basic practices such as jogging. IF these centres are built over a broader extent of a country to include all cities and villages, more people will find it doable to join one and start exercising; thus improving their general health. This is mainly because regular training helps cardiovascular system become sufficiently active and oxygen can flow to all tissues, nourishing them and getting rid of hazardous substances.
Nonetheless, physical exercise is not the only ideal way to improve health, but other measures need to be considered besides it. One major beneficial method in this regard is adopting a healthy diet. Unfortunately, the fast food industry is ever rising in popularity, which means that many people consume large amounts of these mostly unhealthy meals. If authorities impose heavier taxes on these kinds of food, this popularity will gradually decline. It is also important for governments to publish many campaigns aiming at raising the public awareness of the importance of balanced meals that include fresh fruits and vegetables. Simultaneously, they ought to encourage people to abandon detrimental habits such as smoking and excessive alcoholism.
In conclusion, even though encouraging people to exercise by providing more sports facilities is extremely helpful in terms of public health, other measures should be implemented such as stimulating people to adopt a healthy diet and to abandon harmful habits. This way can achieve better results than adopting one measure without others.
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also, besides, but, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37573964497 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81963838668 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62426035503 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4751155797 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.785714286 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276962493104 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927060537579 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693685235112 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180699283764 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519804235878 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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