All children should learn to speak a foreign language as soon as they start school. How far do you agree with this proposal. How important is it for a child to learn a foreign language ?
it is considered that at the beginning of education all children should start to be taught by new language to be able to speak on it. it seems to me that tuition In young age of foreign language allows broadening child’s horizons and makes their life more diverse.
The main beneficial would appear to be that with knowledge of different tongue permit to communicate with foreigners and expand a range of social environment which can be a great advice to become an independent of birth location. For instance, those who were born in one country and from childhood be taught by new language, without any difficulties can find new opportunities such as education or friends in another. A further advantage of learning new dialect is development of ability assimilates information, which improves intelligent quality of person. According to researches due to learning something new humans brain activities increase and it influences primary on knowledgeable and creativity of person this means that learning of language also helps to become smarter. one final point for this proposal is the boosting cross-culture understanding, by which child can see how other people perceive the world. it also can not be denied the through awareness about cultural traditions other countries comes comprehension of world globalization in other words how big the world is and diversified.
Admittedly, it also is understood that learning of new language by children should not to be imposed. Presenting of studying a something new should be derive a pleasure to a child or it may even harm to them.
Overall, it seems reasonable to receive additional skills like learning foreign language in order to have more variable opportunities and being intellectual ability.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, for instance, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28825622776 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1066250026 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594306049822 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.9652140276 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.090909091 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25705500957 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996585363248 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565169038517 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163581132092 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259608570557 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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