It is considered that everyone should do philanthropy in order to support all in need. It seems to me that making charity is a good way to encourage needy people and make word better, and I will explain why in my essay.
Firstly, nowadays there are many people who is in difficult life situation got into it through no fault of their own to them can be attributed position such as health issue, poor and starvation. And in order to support these people there are many organization through which everyone can backing them. Supporters, myself included, of the idea that each person can denote some part of their income to charity believe that even insignificant finance aid can positively influence on life of many people. For instance, if everyone, who has finance opportunity, bring one dollar on philanthropy will make a huge contribution in helping people to threat from diseases or can be benefit for those who hasn’t got their own estate. Another reason, why giving charity is great decision, is an ethical side and good way to show children that generosity is important factor in our society and each person have to form such kinds of characteristics. Finally, donating charity is a factor which can boost individual mood and it allows to feel satisfaction through helping others.
Turning to the other side of all optimistic aspects which can bring donation, it should be understood that, unfortunately, not all can do philanthropy in connection with their economic position in society. And making donation can not be imposed to everyone because it should be the own decision of person.
Overall, it can not be denied that in our complicated world such thing like helping needy is a valuable deed and good chose to make others life better.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'back'
Suggestion: back
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Message: Did you mean 'feeling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: feeling
...can boost individual mood and it allows to feel satisfaction through helping others. T...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93243243243 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78470202646 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554054054054 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.3697877154 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.727272727 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0844932267106 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409688767144 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401007750344 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0550855093339 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348273063018 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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