It is often said that male and female are brought into the world to accomplish various kind of work. However, the issue is not entirely straightforward and arguments can also be made against the idea. This essay will discuss the debate and give a concluding view.
On the one hand, those who support the idea that men and women are able to carry out only work which is given them by nature refer to inner abilities of them. These range from thinking patterns to instincts which are not completely different from men and women but there are some discrepancies that allow performing a work better. For instance, it is considered that maternal instinct is inherent for female and it means that only women are able to play the role of mother to their newborn child because it is their natural ability which is established in their genes. Another argument in support of gender difference is the physical distinction, by nature men are stronger than women and that fact is caused by genes and it helps men do more difficult work.
By contrast, opponents of this view point out that nowadays when physical strength goes by the wayside mental power comes to the fore and this ability is equally possessed by men and women. Examples can be seen in many IT companies when female take the identical position as male and accomplish the same work complexity. In addition, it must be said that in hard times such as war or depression women showed themselves in varying degrees to men and did the same work.
Overall, women are considered the weaker sex and are not able to cope with difficult work but as we can see it is not the case and women also can perform tough task, unlike men that cannot change women and play mother role to their children
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62459546926 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40941499783 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537216828479 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.9517690945 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.909090909 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0909090909 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351211684741 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125566431059 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558872278403 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189970160296 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619906830384 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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