It is often said that marketing and promotion is the most essential part of a business. It seems to me that these two elements are not, in fact, making a significant contribution to business development, and I will why in this essay.
Firstly, marketing makes the only shell of product or service but does not encourage product development. In order to the product be in demand, an important factor is a quality. If the quality is cheap no one will purchase the product even with loads of advertisements or promotions. This means that quality influence a desire to buy a product or service which in turn affects the profit company. Furthermore, manager skills of a head and competitive employees also play a vital role in the organizing of business. In many books of business are described how management influence on the organization that leads to the strengthening and growth of the company. Also, it can not be taken into account that we live in a century of artificial technology and IT can play the crucial role in the choice of the buyer. In our days a lot of companies have online markets and it makes easy to purchase goods, thereby it can positively effect the reputation and credibility of the company.
Admittedly, I agree with those who admire that marketing and promotion is a key in successful business. These fields allow analyzing the market in which a company buys the products. Market researching necessary for two reasons: statistics, data. This factors can help a business to chose the right strategy to grow and become better for a customer.
To summarise, we cannot allocate one significant factor which will be encourage the development of a business. The approach of growth profit should be chosen by he further plans the company.
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...hosen by he further plans the company.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, then, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89966555184 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92498196801 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541806020067 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2146554618 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.5625 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8125 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154815185954 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565255433595 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102616250541 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104644969526 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811386177962 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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