Governments of different countries claim that development of economics is the main purpose. While others believe that there are other ways of growth nation which can help to the same extent. In my essay, I try to consider two different positions on this question.
To begin, it is known that progress of economic is a significant part of a development any country. Financial growth influence on important parts of any advanced nation as business, a stock market, and interior currency. If economy raise, these three constituents go up too, therefore it leads to improvements in living standards of society. As a result, more schools, hospitals, and other social institutions can be built in communities so that will bring benefits to citizens.
On the other hand, economic progress is not always taking a considerable part in significant field of society.There are other types of progress for example technical, which can affect a country not less than economic progress. Technical progress can allow evolving an industrialization of the country, and it can lead to increase the number of jobs.
In conclusion, the economy is obviously a key marker of a country’s success, but social, environmental and health criteria are equally significant.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...pment of economics is the main purpose. While others believe that there are other way...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...le part in significant field of society.There are other types of progress for example...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an industrialization of the country, and it can lead to increase the number of jo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34170854271 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20991872054 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643216080402 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5685839043 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.3 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221410311488 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733655540622 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732876493504 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111394692645 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777804354656 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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