Tuition fee has been escalating for centuries and hampers the residents expose to education. This could be tackled by mitigating cuts or provide free education to all individuals with the government money. In my perspective, I totally agree that education should be handed off free.
First of all, the reduction in tuition fee could backed low income parents not worrying about paying food costs, accomodation fee and mobility expenses. The parents today are facing a vast burden of paying studying cost which make them stressful since they have to take up a second job so as to make ends meet. Many have to cut down on extra fee on holiday or shopping demands and their children is not likely to be given toys or video games that can make them feel unfair. For example, children would not be rewarded vacations or toys for their achievement due to the huge sums of money that have to be paid for their current tuition and maintenance grants for their further education. Thus, cutting the studying expense would assist parents be able to afford a vacation trip for the family and get rid of the burden of finance.
Secondly, cutting off the tuition fee could make people with potential and talent contribute greatly for their nation and society. Some people who are gifted students or prodigies deserve investment from government as regard to what values they can bring to human. If people embedded with outstanding ability but without money or financial assistance, they can not develop their ability to the highest level. For instance, Ivy colleges in the state offer their students a full education without earning profit from them and still home to top-qualitied students including acclaimed scientist, entrepreneurs like Barack Obama, Steve Jobs. That is the reason why school or universities should not include fee to give students facility and lecture to study and making progress.
To conclude, all education programs ranging from primary, middle school to higher education should be paid by government not the residents in order not to put parents under financial pressure and receiving contribution of talented people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'back'
Suggestion: back
...all, the reduction in tuition fee could backed low income parents not worrying about p...
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Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...since they have to take up a second job so as to make ends meet. Many have to cut down o...
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Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...den of finance. Secondly, cutting off the tuition fee could make people with p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, as to, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60662264869 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.4697140739 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228262070175 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774039163194 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620027387356 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152889521727 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740844067015 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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