Obesity is one of the biggest health problems in the world, affecting both adults and children. Many people seem to think that obesity are caused by unhealthy diet and lack of exercises. In this essay I will look at the main reasons of weight gain in people and propose some solutions.
The primary reason of increasing obesity level is that most people are eating gigantic portions of heavily processed foods. In addition, these days, ordering takeaway food and picking up meals with additives at a store are much easier than cooking healthy food oneself. For example, in my home town, it’s easier for people to get processed foods, as opposed to fruits and vegetables. To battle obesity effectively, authorities must put additional taxes on fattening food and increase the health of the populace by subsidizing all five food groups. Eventually, these actions would help people spend more money on real foods.
Another reason is that most people are less physically active and are avoiding to do physical exercises regularly. Not surprisingly, obesogenic environment such as sedentary jobs and busy schedules make people gain weight. For instance, in Western world, most people have to commute to work by their private cars. Officials should take steps to deal with this issue by focusing on the road infrastructure for bicycle riders and advertising it in mass media that cycling daily help to obese people loss their weight. This would rise pace of weight loss and help them to have the correct weight.
To conclude, overweight has become critical problem among children and adults because of bad eating habit and lack of exercise in a daily routine, so governments should take preventive actions as described above.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13475177305 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59213794304 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620567375887 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7851648316 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.428571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184579052206 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634417893383 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644661710949 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112139822658 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601586467733 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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