With all the problems in the world today, spending money on space exploration is a complete waste. The money could be better spent on other causes.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
The governments of some developed countries have recently started to allocate a proportion of their budget to the exploration of outer space. While some might see this trend as a total waste of money, I disagree with this statement for two reasons.
People opposed to space exploration argue that there are some more important issues that we should focus on. With all current problems on our planet, such as climate change and extreme poverty, there is no sense in investing a huge amount of money in launching rockets to space. On average, it takes around millions of dollars to send a single robotic machine to space and about billions of dollars to land astronauts to the orbit. This sum of money, according to their opinion, can be diverted to dealing with the harmful effect that human activity has on the environment by financing renewable energy sources.
Nevertheless, it is my view that space exploration can be an effective way of addressing climate change. By launching spacecraft to the orbit, scientists have advanced their understanding of Earth’s ecosystem and its atmosphere that helped us find different life forms that can support human existence in the future. This raised our awareness of the damage that people produce to earth and encouraged us to take steps to protect it. Another possible benefit of exploring the space is technology innovation. The deployment of satellites by different countries have seriously improved communication between people by providing access to the Internet even to the remotest parts of the world.
In conclusion, although there are some urgent problems that we need to tackle on our planet, the advantages brought by space exploration can be used to solve the problem of climate change and internet connection.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, so, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17708333333 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81257501615 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586805555556 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6338139775 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.25 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233625484369 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809222137271 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059534723473 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139764136162 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479952679281 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.