The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea. What are the reasons and solutions?
There is no doubt that wildlife habitats are being destroyed and that whole species of animals are on the verge of disappearance due to human activities on land and in the sea. This essay will outline a number of reasons for this trend and a number of possible solutions to help tackle the issue.
There are two main reasons why animal species are gradually disappearing. Firstly, nowadays deforestation is a critical issue that has mostly happened everywhere in our country and even around the world. For some sources bringing benefits to humans, such as making way to have more spaces in order to support housing projects and agriculture’s development. Additionally, in the forest, the small fauna invades their soil parts to grow by the hardy perennials that have existed before them many years ago. Secondly, due to human entertainment and illegal trading activities on land and in the sea, for instance, fishing fish’s competition or poaching wildlife animals, which leads to a significant reduction in the number of rare animals, several species that are hunted with no limit are disappearing now, and marine dabris has happened in lots of areas in the ocean.
Thus, to tackle these problems, both the government and our community should take steps to address the issues. There are some solutions the citizens can give others in the creature’s life and evolution, for example, applying hi-tech machinery in agriculture and construction to minimise the effect of pollution and not littering anywhere and anytime in daily life in a serious way to prevent climate change. Moreover, the government is also responsible for stopping this alarming condition. Take organising the Green Life campaigns as an example; they will take more concern in planting trees, abandoning them, and punishing the offenders by law.
In conclusion, natural habitat losses and illegal wildlife hunting and trafficking are the two main drivers of animal extinction. To address this issue, governments must protect and restore natural ecosystems, and everyone should join hands to stop the illegal trade of endangered species.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a serious way" with adverb for "serious"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29080118694 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84206084194 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596439169139 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.8795051415 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.153846154 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9230769231 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19708197692 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637009367296 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100717222896 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125114644218 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115737436572 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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