Art is considered an important part of society as well as an expression of its culture. Therefore, many people argue that children should be required to study the arts at school.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary society, it is generally believed that art plays an essential part in human's life as well as preserving cultural value. Hence, it is necessary for children to pay more attention to art subjects at school. Personally, I totally agree with this statement.
For a variety of reasons, it would be effective for children to learn art as it promotes their creativity and imagination. Through studying art subjects, children will be allowed to express their ideas without encountering any boundaries. Moreover, they can also use their imagination in creating a piece of art. In addition, after learning art subjects, children will be trained to become more disciplined and responsible for their work. This is mainly because during the process of making artworks or training for performance, young children have tos follow the rules and instructions as well as exert their time and effort in order to complete the training sessions. As a result, they will become more disciplined and tend to appreciate their work.
Apart from the abovementioned practical concerns, it would be better if there are more art classes in the school's curriculum. The main reason is that cultural and artistic values will be well preserved and developed through different generations, especially among children. Furthermore, learning art will help educate children and raise their awareness of the importance of art. Additionally, art helps to orientate children’s future career perspective. Since children with innate talents can be nurtured from studying art, when they reach adulthood to become an artist which enables them to make a living by producing artworks.
Taking everything into consideration, this reinforces my perspective that it is vital for children to acquire more knowledge about art when they are at school.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 342, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to art', 'to be'
Suggestion: to art; to be
...ece of art. In addition, after learning art subjects, children will be trained to b...
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Line 3, column 529, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng artworks or training for performance, young children have tos follow the rules...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'schools'' or 'school's'?
Suggestion: schools'; school's
...er if there are more art classes in the schools curriculum. The main reason is that cul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, in addition, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41052631579 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99225634433 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589473684211 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8649331017 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.8 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277305203634 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103897387471 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521716011006 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184240285479 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639736686033 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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